We are learning how to make our stories interesting. I learnt how to add more information to my stories. I found it hard to add sound words. Next time I would like to try this again.
Looking out over my trampoline I saw my Uncle doing some doing fireworks on New Year’s Day. I was so excited when my Uncle did the fireworks because I was in a good mood.
more fireworks exploded.
I asked Uncle, “Can I do one firework please?”
He said “NO it’s dangerous you might hurt yourself.”
I started to get angry, so I stomped at the way into the house and cried.
Later my Uncle came into the house to talk to me and he said “STOP CRYING! Your acting like a baby.”
I said, “Go away leave me alone!!”
Do you wish you could light a firework? I can't wait to be 18.
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