War
Fearless, Death
shaking, shriving, dying
wet, holes, friends, family
surviving, hoping, loving
proud, excited
I am a Year 6 student at School Red Hill in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room Pukeko and my teacher is Gran and Matua Nigel. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Anahera I like your poem because I like how it is about ANZAC and it has words to describe it.What was your favourite part of writing the poem?
ReplyDeleteHello Anahera!I really like your poem abut ANZAC.I also liked how you painted the background a orange red and yellow!Was it easy to make the ANZAC art?
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