WALHT write an interesting recount.
I am trying to add more detail.
I found it tricky because I needed to remember the story.
Next time I want to remember to use different beginnings.
Wednesday, September 18, 2019
Sneetches retold
Walking across the beach I saw Sneetches with stars playing volleyball. I hated them I wanted to play but then I saw a machine coming towards me with a hideous stranger and asked me "I will give you a star just pay me $3 dollars" I answered back with a "Yes!" so he started up the machine then he told the Sneetches to go in the machine. When the Sneetches went in the machine ,he went "bosh, boom, splat" he came out and was surprised that he had an star.
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